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The Little King’s Eye” Pt.2

An excerpt from a work in progress. This is a rough draft, but com­ments are always welcome:

The mono-colored wooden carv­ing was a sort of rough abstract. Look­ing at it one way, it was a lit­tle four legged, bushy tailed, big-eared canid. As you tilted it another way, it became a man. It was a recent birth­day present from Ben. She remem­bered the day clearly.


Her rant unwound into a weak sob, as the mot­ley crew in her kitchen stared at her. Sarah took a shud­der­ing breath, break­ing the silence of their regard. Stub­born, she turned toward the counter and her drugs. Scrab­bling for the bot­tles she scat­tered them across the mar­ble, some div­ing toward the floor. She seized two and knelt to pick up another. As she did, the kachina stepped up to her hold­ing one of the bot­tles. Sarah word­lessly snatched it from his arms and scooped the oth­ers up as quickly as pos­si­ble.
As she rose, back­ing out of the kitchen toward the stairs and her bed­room, she real­ized the Bud­dha and Kai-ote were gone. The kachina regarded her from the kitchen floor. His arms folded across his chest, masked head cocked in silent bird­like dis­ap­proval.
The throb­bing in her skull was much worse now. Her body was awash in waves of nau­sea as the flick­er­ing red obscured her vision again. She turned away from the kitchen mak­ing for the stairs and ran head­long into the Bud­dha. His stone body now stood before her, Kai-ote perched on his shoul­der. He blocked her way to the stairs. To her right was the front door, and behind her the kitchen. Panic set in, and Sarah tried to flee. Drop­ping the pre­scrip­tion bot­tles, she grabbed for the front door latch, with both hands.
The stone Bud­dha moved incred­i­bly fast. One moment he was stand­ing between her and the stairs, a mad­den­ing Mona Lisa smile on his impas­sive face. The next moment his arm shot out, pin­ning the front door closed. Sarah tried vainly to pull at the door, fight­ing against the weight of the stone statue.
Her heart raced as the blood pounded in her head, mak­ing the pain and the nau­sea worse. She retched, and turned away from the Bud­dha, run­ning back into the kitchen. As she raced toward the sink, Sarah kicked the kachina, send­ing him slid­ing across the tile. She grabbed the counter and dou­bled over. Dip­ping her head into the sink she threw up. The purg­ing removed what lit­tle strength she had left in her legs. She sank to the floor and passed out.
Her next rec­ol­lec­tions became a series of snap­shots bro­ken by the dark­ness of clos­ing eye­lids. First there was the feel­ing of some­one pick­ing her up. Then the head and shoul­ders of the Bud­dha look­ing down as the house moved above and around her. The next mem­ory was a sense of ris­ing up the stairs, being car­ried by some­one and her bed­cov­ers being pulled over her.

Her thoughts were inter­rupted by the sounds of mur­mured con­ver­sa­tion down­stairs. As she slid out of bed, and crept toward the door, she could make out snatches of phrases.


The Bud­dha sat on her couch, legs crossed fore­arms rest­ing on his rotund belly. His stone face impas­sively tracked the kachina as it paced back and forth across the wooden floor. Kai-ote sat on the cof­fee table, his legs dan­gling over the edge.

Sarah rose from her hid­ing place and stepped out onto the bal­cony, look­ing down into the liv­ing room at the odd group. The Bud­dha noticed her first. The other two fol­lowed his gaze and in a very human way, they stopped talk­ing and stared up at her. The Bud­dha smiled. It had a calm­ing effect on Sarah, and gave her the courage to speak.


She sat in an arm­chair and watched, amazed as the Bud­dha reclined into his lotus posi­tion on the floor and Huhuwa and Kai-ote arranged them­selves on the cof­fee table to her left. Each of the com­pan­ions moved with a sort of stop motion grace that was almost absolutely silent, and incred­i­bly fast. She found her­self blink­ing and rub­bing her eyes to try to get used to it.



The Little King’s Eye”

An excerpt from a work in progress. This is a rough draft, but com­ments are always welcome:


Sarah slowly mas­saged her tem­ples. Her eyes were closed, head bent for­ward as if under an extreme bur­den. Sun­light bounc­ing off chrome and mar­ble in her bright kitchen only brought to mind her despair as it was jux­ta­posed against that inter­nal dark­ness. The beau­ti­ful spring day did noth­ing to raise her spir­its. She sat alone, wait­ing.
On the counter, a small reg­i­ment of pre­scrip­tion bot­tles whis­pered their chem­i­cal promises to her. She opened one eye slightly, and con­sid­ered their labeled ranks. Some mood alter­ing, some stim­u­lants, but most were a sort of anti-depressant, a vir­tual cor­nu­copia of obliv­ion in mul­ti­ple flavors.

She shook her head slowly, reached out and opened the bot­tle of Xanax. With trem­bling hands she dry swal­lowed two more of the lit­tle pills.

Sto­ically clos­ing the bot­tle and putting it back in for­ma­tion, she walked to the liv­ing room and low­ered her­self onto the couch.
The red was start­ing to flicker at the edges of her vision. As her head filled with a dry hot throb, she tried the breath­ing exer­cise Dr. Carter had given her. A deep diaphragm stretch­ing inhala­tion hold for a three count, and slowly exhale.

Breath­ing rhyth­mi­cally this way, her mind even­tu­ally began to empty. As Sarah became more and more relaxed, the pills took effect and she started to fade off to sleep. Drift­ing aim­lessly on the smoky black tide of uncon­scious­ness, nearly reach­ing the obliv­ion she craved. Then the phone rang. Its inces­sant jan­gle yanked her par­tially back from the cot­ton com­fort of Xanax, leav­ing her mud­dle headed and con­fused as she scrab­bled for the receiver.



In muted tones she booked the appoint­ment but kept her eyes closed, head down through the rest of the con­ver­sa­tion. Sarah cast a nar­row side­ways glance toward the cof­fee table as she turned off the receiver. The kachina was still stand­ing there, its lit­tle wooden body, a few inches away from the lamp where she had placed it.
It cocked its head in that jerky bird-like fash­ion again. A star­tled mur­mur escaped her lips. As the doll slowly folded its arms across its chest and silently regarded her, Sarah could feel her eye­balls jit­ter­ing back and forth in her head.

The voice was clearly male, with a Native Amer­i­can accent. His insis­tence stopped Sarah at the door­way to the kitchen. She leaned against it exhausted. The cool wooden frame felt good against her fore­head as she breathed deeply. With eyes closed, she tried to will the voice away.

She pulled her head away from the door frame and stag­gered into the kitchen toward the mar­ble counter and her med­ica­tions. Some­thing flashed in the cor­ner of her eye. Sarah turned to look, her lithe five-foot tall body sway­ing slightly as if in a gen­tle wind.

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